Creative Writing Breath of life

It's not really good but I just love to write,and this is off the top of my head so please don't be too hard on me

Breath of life

The frozen air, the midnight moon
The blood rushing to your head makes you swoon.
The ecstasy of the magic running through your brain,
Without you realizing that it is pain.

The turmoil of his midnight kiss,
Your body moving in a sigh of bliss,
The blood is pounding in your ears,
Making you realize your most terrible fears.

Your groan in pain, and yet in pleasure,
Your body is as light as a feather.
Was this the attention that you craved,
With your death creeping closer after each wave.

And as the last breath of life passes your lips,
Your mind is turned in a lasting eclipse.