Art first pic

hey guys
this is a pic i drew when i was in a bit of a mood so it's a bit dramatic :sweat2:
it's my first but i'm afraid it's not really in an anime or manga style, but see what you think - comments and critique please!!
thanks
Spiggy xx

ps. big thanks to Mangaka for his help with this! :anime:

 

Wow, thats really cool.

I like the way the wings are done, and the shading is pretty good too. Nice pic.

 

excellennnttt work, spiggy! ^__^ I likey!! that shading,... that pose! uuuaa, so dramatic!! very nicely done!!

 

Very, very nice. ^_^ Well done.

xxxx

 

thats pretty good do you mind if i post some of my pics i think youll like them. :anime: :anime: :anime: :anime:

 

very nice work for afirst pic Spiggy..
i only think that you should make his Stomach and chest longer.
other than that its really good

 

hey thats pretty good!

good one, keep it up :anime:

 

thanks very much guys! :anime:
kain - hehe i'm pleased with the shading too
vash - please feel free to post some of yours i'd love to see them!
thunder dragon - yeah i think you're right i'll bear it in mind i have a nasty feeling that one arm's longer than the other too... :sad:
but thank you all!

 

heres one of my vash pics.never mind this one is chun li from street fighter i drew it when i was eleven years old hope you like it.[/IMG]

 

Spiggy and vash the stampede your pics are very good.
you both shaded your pics excellently.
your detail work was good for both of you.

i like both of your drawings.

 

thanks toeskater91!
hey vash that's cool! i can't believe you did that when you were 11...

 

reply to spiggy

yeah i drew it frome a street fighter comic book.if you check out my thread you can see a pic i drew when i was ten.

 

not fair, vash! how come some people take all the talent... :sad:
ok, here's a line drawing i already posted in the sketch only thread but i suppose i should have posted it here first... :sweat: ah well, here it is anyway!
it's not finished yet i will colour it at some point - this may be a while!

Edit: hehe 100th post! yay! :catgirl:

 

Very good shading in your first pic, Spiggy! Very stylish (?)
Vash's Chun Li is very good too. :anime:

 

your very good keep it up and youll be awesome oneday.

 

thanks vash...i think
:anime:

 

i was comlementing you.

 

yeah, i know i was just teasing! sorry :anime:

 

oh i do have a few suggestions to make.his arms are too strait give them more shape and his body too it should be skinier in the midle of his abdomen. :anime: