Creative Writing Ignored

Side Note: In dedication to my true friends at Boards.jp. Even though sometimes I don't know who they are. But this goes to all of you. Thanks for the fun times.

Aside from that, I actually have a reason this time for writing this piece. I'm not coming back for a while. Partially because I've been feeling ignored in many places, and I'm getting sick and tired of it. Maybe I'm just self-centered. Maybe I crave too much attention, but whatever the case is, I'm taking a rest from b.jp. Sorry. Maybe it won't matter. I don't really view myself as an importance in the lives of many, or perhaps, all or any.

To all that know; you know where to find me.


I'm Gone, over with, and deprived
Silently, the footsteps clatter,
walking away from all that matters

Will you be my guiding star?
The one that shines so brightly, taking me away
Will be drift together afar, quietly in the background

Behind everyone,
not making a sound, we won't make a sound,
Together we drift away, to a far away place

Ahead of time, we're hand in hand,
You took my hand, I took your hand,
Here we are, leading ourselves away, Leader and Follower

Will you be my shooting star?
Will you take my breath away,
Give me a kiss Goodbye, before we depart
Give me a promising embrace, before I'm gone

Will you be tender?
Will you shed a tear?
There I go, I'm gone, I've departed your world.

 

Um was that to me. Engel you are very important to me. you are a great person and freind. I always have tried to show ive liked talking to you but you were busy. You need to keep your head up everyone loves you!I sware.
Dont go plz?

 

whonderfull poem. i'm probably to late to say this but, i may be new, and i may not know you, but i don't think anyone wants to see you go. if i'm not to late, i hope you change your mind.

 

Ooh, I wish I didn't skip over all these poem threads. I would have seen this sooner.

I'm not sure if you meant me to be included in that list, but I will say, that you have had a positive effect on BJP while you were here. I don't think you were ignored. Simply that no one was really aware of you. Unless you really make a spectacle of yourself (which isn't always good), chances are no one will pay a lot of attention to you at first.

Anyway, it's your choice, and I hope you'll be willing to come back before too long, else I'll have to pull out the ol' lasso...

Hm, taking a break from BJP... I've thought about it, but I could never manage it. I love being here too much to simply not come when I can. I'd last maybe 12 hours, tops.